Unpacking the Turn Off: Analyzing Coke Studio Pakistan’s New Song Mehman. The Language Barrier: Coke Studio Pakistan’s Recent Misstep

Coke studio Pakistan dropped a new song and its totally a turn off for anyone who knows Urdu..
Grammar can be a crucial aspect of songwriting, especially when it comes to lyrics in a language like Urdu, which has a rich literary history and cultural significance. It’s important for songwriters to be mindful of grammar and language usage to convey their message effectively and respectfully.This song’s lyrics have had grammatical errors, inconsistent language usage, or poorly constructed sentences, which can be jarring for listeners who understand Urdu. This can detract from the overall impact and enjoyment of the song.
Zeb Bangash and Noorima Rehan literally made me feel cringe. Zeb Bangash said Rum Jhum and yaak Rum jhum was just a turn off for me , melody voices music is stunning but who wrote the lyrics, they are too cheezy , haan heran houn main par weeran nahi, like are you really that illiterate that a weran is for places even if its metaphor it doesnt just suit here yeah I am astonished but not deserted, does it even make sense? tera ahsaas hay teri yaad nahi.

like what? I dont miss you but i have your feeling,and here you are talking about your damn feeling suddenly you totally changed your narrative by saying rum jhum is ghata ki tarah mehman houn main tera samaan nahi , what do you mean by this? I am a guest like this cloudiness I am not your luggage , you were talking about your damn feeling for God sake. every stanza is a joke of this song, salon main piro ke rahaton ko kho ke betay hue ansoun ki yaarian samo k , ajab kahanion ki( kay damn kahanion kay humrah) main humrah, dhondon chahay jitna b apnay jahan main, miln gi kahan main tau houn asmaan main, be rabt totally absurd, dhondon gi? talking about someone else or your own slef? if you are talking to someone else she should say dhondo gay not dhondoun gi, because in next she is telling you cant find me i am in sky, chali chali main humrah? what sense this make here? just read all this above can you even tell what the lyricist was trying to say? Damn Pakistan has alot of talented poets lyricist and singers why you chose this damn girl who cant pronouce Rim jhim and Dhondo gay* moreover the next girl singing in fake wana be burger accent why? why you cant have a single singer that have good acent, choti choti khawahishain gungunati hain sajati hain yeh dunya، barg o bar ke angan main ( barg o bar litterally means trees and leaves) muskurati hay gul khilati hay yeh dunya( like seriously? is that even make sense? you mean to say on the viranda of trees and their fruits world is responsible for blossoming flowers ok now next line , heraton ki nagri hay yeh dunya (lol)
here you metaphorically describe that dunya or world is cause of blossoming flowers on viranda of trees and leaves but world iteself is a amazing city 😂..
I dont know where you derived from these lyrics I guess these are the literal translations
chahatoun ke bhi tau rastay kai hain .. ok
dil ki nazar main sab hi hum hi hain?
what does that even mean on first line you are saying there are different ways of love , ok but in the eye of heart everyone is us ,
Tum bhi hum hi ho, Hum bhi tum hi ho. now just read these lines again does it even make any sense?
again chorus
chahaton ke bhi rastay kai chun lo koi( on a lighter note chose me or you we are all one😂)
I must say this lyricist doesnt even know Urdu at all. Urdu is such a beautiful language even listening these lines without understanding them can rejoice your mood but what about Urdu itself? its literally crying for help in this song, please make sense God damn it .just adding hum qafia alfaz in the ending of line doesnt make it poetic. Learn basic urdu atleast then write this type of bull shit, yeah its bull shit. Can you catagorize this song in any genre ? is it love song or ballad? even if you are translating it from some other language atleast choose right words that make sense. 😢 Coke studio really need to hire some poets too. even your so called collabs songs and punjabi songs too dont have good or meaningful lyrics please work on it.